First Cut Feedback

Holding Shots Steady
- Hand held shots fit the style of the documentary
- Some shots can be steadier
- Only steady when its meant to be
- Intentional shaky camera, some shots are shaky though.
- Shaky/ part of it, but too shaky

Framing of Shots
- Group shots framed very well, could have more individual focus through-out the house scenes
-  When shaky camera wasn't used, use of shots was decent

Appropriate Material for Task
- Clear Conventions used for the style
- Smile too much

Selecting Mise En Scene
(colour, lighting, props, setting)
- Clear use of props and setting to create an atmosphere
- Lighting and contrast needs to be adjusted
- Effective low-key lighting, but sometimes too low-key
- Lighting a bit dark

Editing for Meaning
- Could be developed by ensuring shots are structured to fit the tone
- Smiling/Corpsing
- Use of good contrast to create supernatural effect

Varied Shots Transitions and Post Production Effects
- After effects still to be added
- Bleeping needs to be fixed as it doesn't cover the sound, the epileptic scene needs to be fixed. A fast forward needs to be added to the waiting scene. Night vision needs to be added.

Use of Sound
- Sound needs to be consistent across the piece
- Very loud, clipping, laughing. Could use more voice-overs.
- Fuzzy
- Effective rock music
- Swear bleeps aren't very good

Use of Titles
Some unfinished, a clearer title sequence could be included
- No titles (very few) only channel 4
- Channel 4 was used

Overall Comment
- Some high quality footage has been produced and a level 4 can be achieved with the addition of more work.
- I think it could use more voice-overs, and some shots can be sped up and shortened. But overall very good.